It is generally agreed that fewer people today write letters through the mail and post compared with 20 century. What factors have led this situation? What will the impact be on the lives of future generations?

Today, modern people
uses
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use
are using
mobile phone and computer to exchange information rather than writing letters through email or post compared with the twentieth century.There are few causes, and key impacts
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which I will outline now.
To begin
with
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,
hand-
writen
set down in writing in any of various ways
written
writing
correspondence became more slow and out-dated.
For instance
, if e-mails compared with some modern applications as well as Telegram, WhatsApp
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Viber show that nowadays a lot of people can make
decision
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a decision
the decision
decisions
in
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at
the
last
minute that means
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minute, that means
even if people use emails there will be
lose
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losing
their time by sending
letter
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letters
, writing or anything else, as the result modern application much
more faster
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faster
and convenient for our population.
Moreover
, due to
development
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the development
of tourism industry and transportation, today, a lot of people travel all around the world, so checking email box and replying them is much
more easier
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easier
and less time consuming.
Finally
, the quality of paper and ink, writing letters is more difficult to maintain them and
also
it takes up a lot of space to hold them, but with modern technologies we can easily
instal
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install
the application and keep them for a long time without worry about loose them.
This
situation has some impacts on future generation
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there are both positive and negative effects.
Firstly
, as we know that paper being produced by wood, if people stop using these at a large amount
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environment
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the environment
will be more protected.
Moreover
,
second
impact is money
efficient
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efficiently
, that means
cost
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the cost
a cost
of painting and producing is not small, so it is
also
saves money,
instead
of them government may use finance
to
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for
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
purposes.
However
, it seems like a refined solution, hand-written letters gives people something like emotion, that means people can re-read
this
letter and
also
they can fill unforgettable memory for whoever receives it.Letters are heart-
toughing
and
this
is something
irreplacable
impossible to replace
irreplaceable
for each person. To sum up
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the cause of
this
trend is primarily from the
techonology
the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
development, and the effect
are felt
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is felt
is felted
in terms of cost and people's emotions.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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