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think of 3 typical charecteristics of the vietnamese people

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In my opinion, there are 3 typical characteristics of the Vietnamese people.
First
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, it’s saving money. They usually save money from their young age and until their old age. Nowadays, in the city,
this
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 view seems to
change but
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change, but
 those in
countryside
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the countryside
 still
share
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shares
this
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 point.The
second
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 outstanding feature is they live modestly and always work hard. In the past, they
live
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lived
 mainly on farming, they wake up early in the morning and work all long day on the farm till the end of
afternoon
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the afternoon
. They
also
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 don’t demand too much
for
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of
 their life, which you can be seen when seeing their houses and their customs. Until these modern days, they still have
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 habit.
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, Vietnamese are actually friendly and hospitable people. Their hospitality is shown clearly in the way they greet and treat their friends and visitors. Either pre-arranged or unexpected, you always can receive a warm welcome by Vietnamese people because
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 is a part of their traditional culture. Despite going through many ups and downs, basically,
Vietnamese
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the Vietnamese
 have still kept
traditional values
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the traditional values
 in their lifestyle reflected in the relationship of family and friends.

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