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Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the travelers?

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Travelling can be for many reasons. Today, people
travel
 much more than they did earlier. Earlier the reason for
travel
 was
work
 or holidays. Today, the reasons are many. People
travel
 for
work
, business and holidays till date, but some add
ons
 are for various projects, research
work
, to create a travelogue and many more. Earlier there was not much that a person could do by
travelling but
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travelling, but
 today, he can! He can do all research
work
, understand
business
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the business
 by travelling to
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
 part of his country and even outside his country. Travelling has many benefits, I am not talking only about the professional aspect but
also
 the personal. Life is stressful and hectic for every individual, most of us consider travelling as a stress buster. It is not only confined to
this
, foodies can explore the taste of different delicacies by travelling, one can know about different traditions and
cultres
a particular society at a particular time and place
cultures
 by travelling to different parts of the world. One can create a blog and post experience, interviews, details of every place they visit. Many create their travelogues too. Today, in the world of
instagram
,
Accept space
,
facebook
Suggestion
Facebook
etc
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
 people love to flaunt their
travel
 details on
such
appps
earnest or urgent request
appeals
. The new generation whose life is all about selfies and posts, they love to visit different places, click pictures and post. Elderly people enjoy travelling as it gives them a break from their monotonous lives. So we can say that travelling has increased many folds in the past few years and every individual had his/her own motive for travelling. Travelling has its own benefits for every individual, it never disheartens anyone.
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