Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the travelers?

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Travelling can be for many reasons. Today, people
travel
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much more than they did earlier. Earlier the reason for
travel
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was
work
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or holidays. Today, the reasons are many. People
travel
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for
work
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, business and holidays till date, but some add
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are for various projects, research
work
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, to create a travelogue and many more. Earlier there was not much that a person could do by
travelling but
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travelling, but
today, he can! He can do all research
work
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, understand
business
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the business
by travelling to
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
part of his country and even outside his country. Travelling has many benefits, I am not talking only about the professional aspect but
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the personal. Life is stressful and hectic for every individual, most of us consider travelling as a stress buster. It is not only confined to
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, foodies can explore the taste of different delicacies by travelling, one can know about different traditions and
cultres
a particular society at a particular time and place
cultures
by travelling to different parts of the world. One can create a blog and post experience, interviews, details of every place they visit. Many create their travelogues too. Today, in the world of
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,
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,
facebook
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Facebook
etc
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
people love to flaunt their
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details on
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appps
earnest or urgent request
appeals
. The new generation whose life is all about selfies and posts, they love to visit different places, click pictures and post. Elderly people enjoy travelling as it gives them a break from their monotonous lives. So we can say that travelling has increased many folds in the past few years and every individual had his/her own motive for travelling. Travelling has its own benefits for every individual, it never disheartens anyone.
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