The charts below show reasons for travel and the main issues for the travelling public in the US in 2009.

The charts below show reasons for travel and the main issues for the travelling public in the US in 2009.
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The charts below show reasons for travel and the main issues for the travelling public in the US in 2009. The graph
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cause
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trip
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the trip
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while
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foundation problems for the journey audience in the US
2009
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in 2009
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.
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,the principal
reason
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for
journey
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the journey
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of people in the US is business
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reason
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reasons
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and the travelling cost is considered as the most
fundumental
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fundamental
issue
the
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travelling public. In 2009,
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reason
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the reason
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for travel highest
percentage
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48 for business work,
main
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the main
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issues
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issue
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for the trip public highest
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is 36 for
price
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the price
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of travel.
Traveled
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less for social
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is 10.The figure for visiting
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a friend
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friend
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friends
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and
relative
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the relative
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reason
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reasons
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is the lowest one only
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percentage
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a percentage
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6
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of 6
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. Six travelling problems,the highest cost journey is
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36,five other principal.The identity
aggressive
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of aggressive
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drivers and
personal
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the personal
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reason
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reasons
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it
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apply
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is
percentage
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17 and 19.
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,we can see another similarity
shopping
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between shopping
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percentage
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16 and highway.congestion
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14. (135)
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words reason, percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 8 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the sixth paragraph.
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