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what season (or time of the year) it is what the weather is like at this time what people usually do at this time and explain why you enjoy that season or time of the year or and explain why you enjoy that season or time of the year more than other seasons or times of the year.

#season #time #year #weather #people #seasons #times
Well, I’m living in Hanoi
and you
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and, you
 know, the weather patterns are quite different between the North and the South of Vietnam.There are four distinct seasons in Hanoi and the one that I like the most is autumn. Autumn in Hanoi usually lasts for about 3 months, starting in September and ending in November. It seems to be the most comfortable season in the whole
year
. The weather during the fall is normally cool with some sunny spells. The temperature tends to fluctuate from 20 to 25 degree
celsius
Swedish astronomer who devised the centigrade thermometer (1701-1744)
Celsius
. Occasionally, there are light rains in the
evening but
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evening, but
 they are often just short showers. With the cool breezes, it is ideal for people to get together outside and hang out with their friends.
Anothing
 thing is that everyone wants to have picnics in the urban areas near Hanoi and take some pictures with their family.
Also
,
this
 time of the
year
 marks the beginning of a new school
year
 for students around Vietnam.
In contrast
, the summer is boiling, so it is
torturing
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torture
 to have to go out in the streets under the hot sun.
Likewise
, the winter is freezing and in a typical spring there are usually heavy rains. So, these are really unattractive features of the other seasons.
However
, the fresh
weather
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water
 during the autumn really makes me feel relaxed and energizes me to do a lot of things.
That is
 the major reason why I prefer the fall and why it has always been my favourite time of the
year
.
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