You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help. Write a letter to your friend

Hi Joe How are you? I heard you travelled to 14 Europe countries
this
summer. How was your trip? You know,I have wanted to study in the UK since my childhood and the reason why I am writing
this
letter to you is that if you have time,could you help me to find a part-time job in London? At the outset, I applied to major in education law for my master's degree and several days ago I got an e-mail from the University of Bristol. I was accepted into
this
university.
Furthermore
,I won 50% of the scholarship too. I decided to live in
campus
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apartment.
While
Unfortunately
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I cannot find a flexible and part-time job near my university. I have been working in the sphere of Law since 2019 and at the moment I want to work in government ministries,like the Ministry of Education or the Ministry of Youth. I will be over the moon if you help me to find some kind of job. I hope you will give me a hand and I am waiting for your reply letter as soon as possible. Yours sincerely, Kim Chin In
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single idea per paragraph
Ensure that each paragraph has a single main idea to improve clarity.
suitable writing tone
Try to maintain a more formal tone throughout the letter. While a friendly tone is acceptable, some expressions may seem too casual for a formal request.
complete response
The letter has a clear purpose and effectively communicates the request to the friend.
logical structure
The structure is logical and each section flows naturally from one to the next, ensuring good coherence.
greeting and closing
The greeting and closing are suitably friendly, creating a good connection with the reader.
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