Consumers are faced with increasing number of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think are consumers influenced by advertisement ? what measure can be taken to protect them.

It is universal fact that,
advertisement
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the advertisement
is
key part
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a key part
of modern business and is a form of modern art. Yes, it is true that
now a days
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nowadays
there are plenty of companies which are making
same
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the same product
product
advertise for their
product
. Due to
this
reason, there are
number
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a number
of
advertise
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advertising
for one
product
from various competing companies. To
large extent
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a large extent
, I believe that consumers are influenced by
advertisement
. The
impact
of
advertisement
and
suggestion
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the suggestion
to protect
consumer
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the consumer
consumers
is written in father paragraph of
essay
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the essay
an essay
. There
is
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are
both
side
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sides
of
impact
of
advertisement
on consumer
,
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,
positive as well as negative. To initiate with positive
impact
, because of
advertisement
people are aware about various
type
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types
of products and the features. To cite an example, if there is
new mobile phone
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a new mobile phone
is launching,
then
by
advertisment
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisement
consumers comes to know about that mobiles and their features. Beside
this
, there is
negative
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negative, impact
impact
also
,
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,
children are majorly influenced by
advertisement
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advertising
and put pressure on parents to buy
product
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a product
the product
which is shown in the
advertisement
. Now moving onto suggestion to protect customers from manipulate,
government
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the government
should
banned
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ban
advertisements of
product
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products
a product
the product
which has risk of health.
Furthermore
, if there is
risk
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a risk
the risk
of health by using
product
so, there should be
label
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a label
the label
on the
product
about
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on
this
.
Additionally
,
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,
government
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the government
should make Censor
Board which
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Board, which
decides
rather give
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to rather give
permission for
advertisement
or should be banned.
Thus
, to conclude that,
finally
it can be said that
,
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,
consumers influenced by
advertisements but
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advertisements, but
by spreading awareness the consumers and not manipulate from companies.

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