Consumers are faced with increasing number of advertisements from competing companies. To what extent do you think are consumers influenced by advertisement ? what measure can be taken to protect them.

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It is universal fact that,

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the advertisement

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a key part

of modern business and is a form of modern art. Yes, it is true that

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nowadays

there are plenty of companies which are making

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the same product

product

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advertise for their

product

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. Due to

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reason, there are

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advertising

for one

product

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from various competing companies. To

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a large extent

, I believe that consumers are influenced by

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. The

impact

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to protect

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consumers

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on consumer

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positive as well as negative. To initiate with positive

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, because of

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people are aware about various

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types

of products and the features. To cite an example, if there is

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a new mobile phone

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advertisment

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consumers comes to know about that mobiles and their features. Beside

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negative, impact

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children are majorly influenced by

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advertising

and put pressure on parents to buy

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product

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a product

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which is shown in the

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the government

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ban

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so, there should be

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government

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the government

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decides

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to rather give

permission for

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or should be banned.

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it can be said that

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consumers influenced by

advertisements but

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advertisements, but

by spreading awareness the consumers and not manipulate from companies.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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256 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

persuasive techniques
emotional appeals
celebrity endorsements
repetitive messaging
consumer behavior
perceived needs
materialism
unrealistic expectations
government regulations
advertising standards
false claims
transparency
educational campaigns
media literacy
critical thinking skills
ad blockers
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Fully explain your ideas

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