You are planning to take a vacation. Write the letter to friend. In your letter Describe the vocation spot you have chosen Explain how you plan to spend your time there Invite your friend to join you on your vacation

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Dear Vipandeep, I hope you are doing good. As

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I am planning to go on a small holiday in September and wanted to invite you to join

this

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trip. As you know I always wanted to go to some island places. So, I

chosen

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Victoria in British Columbia to go for the holidays. It is

place

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located away from

hustle

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the hustle

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bustle

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and bustle

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and

usually

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less populated. Plus, in autumn we do some activities like parasailing and

bungejumping

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bungee jumping

. My plan is to stay for a week and

made

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plans

accordingly

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. To start, I have already reserved an

airbnb

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in the

dowtown

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downtown

area. So, we could enjoy some scenic views of the cities. Plus, booked tickets for the famous concerts that would be held in that particular week. My

roomate

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roommate

is coming with me and I have little something for you despite being not able to meet you on your

last

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birthday, I wanted to invite you to join me on

this

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trip so that we could spend some quality time together and revive our childhood

memeories

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memories

together. I know that you are already booked your

vacations

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vacation

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for the next month. I hope you will accept my invitation and looking forward to seeing you soon. Warmest regards, Saniya

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grammar

Review your letter for grammar and punctuation errors. For instance, you could correct 'hesitate to contact me' to 'hesitate to share your thoughts.'

detail

Provide more specific details about the activities or locations you plan to visit. This will add more depth and interest to your description.

content

You have effectively described the vacation spot, plans for the trip, and extended a friendly invitation to your friend.

tone

The tone of your letter is warm and inviting, making it pleasant to read for your friend.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

205 words

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