Some people think that the news media nowadays have influenced people’s lives in negative ways. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The media
has long been perceived
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have long been perceived
as a tool providing people with news and information,
thus
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it undoubtedly exerts considerable effects on them. While some argue that
this
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is a negative trend, I personally believe that it does more good than harm. On the one hand, it is without dispute that the news media might sometimes be detrimental to the society.
In particular
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, it has an inclination towards exaggerating the magnitude of the real threat (
for example
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, the contagion of a disease) so as to draw the attention of desired audiences and in pursuit of high audience ratings.
This
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can result in causing a widespread panic among the population.
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, the news media
has
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have
a tendency to emphasise some issues or events, which nearly have little relevance to people’s daily
lives including
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lives, including
an affair that a celebrity is involved with, an occasional vehicle accident, and the like.
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, viewers are prone to get distracted from something is far more noteworthy, namely poverty, environment-related issues, to name but a few.
On the other hand
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, despite the downside mentioned above, news media yet leaves some undeniable positive impacts on human beings.
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and foremost, people can have a provision of needed information on a timely basis, which may contribute to helping them keep up with current affairs and broaden their horizons in many aspects
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as economics, politics and cultural diversity in many parts of the world. More importantly, it would be of great essence to acknowledge that news media can sometimes save lives and reduce casualties. Specifically, it conveys the
firsthand
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first hand
information about impending natural calamity involving Earthquake, hurricanes and grave flood to concerned audiences and enables them to take
corresponding actions
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the corresponding actions
promptly. The authority can declare a state of emergency, organize evacuation and distribute aid to the needy regions. In conclusion,
news media
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the news media
is a double-edged sword; I hold the view,
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, that the perks overshadow the drawbacks.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • contentious
  • sensationalism
  • misinformation
  • exaggerated reporting
  • public panic
  • fake news
  • public opinion
  • social media platforms
  • erosion of trust
  • journalism
  • cynicism
  • polarized society
  • democratic processes
  • public discourse
  • media literacy
  • critical thinking
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