Some people think that being able to communicate with others online is breaking down geographical barriers and enabling people, who would normally never have the chance to meet to commuicate . What are the advantages of international communication online ? Are there any disadvantages of this ?

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As all we know,

internet

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the internet

has became

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has become

part and parcel of our lives. It is considered by some online

communication

is removing geographical barriers. It is not possible to communicate to

another

not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied

other

people without a

internet

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Internet

source. It brings a lot of merits and some demerits too. In

this

essay, I will examine both benefits and outcomes of

this

vogue in the forthcoming paragraphs.

Number

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A number

of advantages of online

commuication

the activity of communicating; the activity of conveying information

communication

are there.

To begin

with, attaching

with

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different people through

internet

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the internet

best

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the best

way to gain more knowledge about

culture

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the culture

and tradition of other people. As, it is not possible for

masses

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the masses

that they travel to long distances to know about other cultures and traditions.

Hence

, it is a good way for individuals to

azuire

make certain of

assure

ensure

knowledge about that

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from

an online source like

internet

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the internet

Secondly

, international

communication

is very beneficial in the terms of

education as

Accept comma addition

education, as

there are plenty of sources and websites related to study.

Therefore

, learners can get information about their academic field with the help of

internet

. To

exampify

be characteristic of

exemplify

, a survey was conducted by

BBC

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the BBC

, England that survey revealed that 90% people are associated with each other

throgh

from beginning to end

through

online

communication

. There are

also

some downsides of online

communication

. To commence with,

masses

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the masses

could misguide through

such

communication

because there is a too much information on the

internet

which is not fully appropriate that can distract to people in some ways. Apart from

this

, there are millions of people who make friends through online

communicatio

the activity of communicating; the activity of conveying information

communication

. Those people can come across fake individuals that can become

grave concern

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a grave concern

for them.

Besides

this

, because of following other lifestyles, their own

culture

and tradition would be

dissappeared

get lost, as without warning or explanation

disappeared

. For

instanc

an occurrence of something

instance

instances

acient

belonging to times long past especially of the historical period before the fall of the Western Roman Empire

ancient

people are adopting western

culture

owing to

this

fact,

acient

belonging to times long past especially of the historical period before the fall of the Western Roman Empire

ancient

culture

dissappearing

the act of leaving secretly or without explanation

disappearing

. To sum up, online

communication

has both merits and demerits. According to my point of view, its pros outweigh cons of

this

development.

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Fully explain your ideas

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new fast trains between cities. others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?