Some people think that being able to communicate with others online is breaking down geographical barriers and enabling people, who would normally never have the chance to meet to commuicate . What are the advantages of international communication online ? Are there any disadvantages of this ?

As all we know,
internet
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the internet
has became
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has become
part and parcel of our lives. It is considered by some online
communication
is removing geographical barriers. It is not possible to communicate to
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
people without a
internet
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Internet
source. It brings a lot of merits and some demerits too. In
this
essay, I will examine both benefits and outcomes of
this
vogue in the forthcoming paragraphs.
Number
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A number
of advantages of online
commuication
the activity of communicating; the activity of conveying information
communication
are there.
To begin
with, attaching
with
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to
different people through
internet
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the internet
is
best
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the best
way to gain more knowledge about
culture
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the culture
and tradition of other people. As, it is not possible for
masses
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the masses
that they travel to long distances to know about other cultures and traditions.
Hence
, it is a good way for individuals to
azuire
make certain of
assure
ensure
knowledge about that
by
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from
an online source like
internet
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the internet
.
Secondly
, international
communication
is very beneficial in the terms of
education as
Accept comma addition
education, as
there are plenty of sources and websites related to study.
Therefore
, learners can get information about their academic field with the help of
internet
. To
exampify
be characteristic of
exemplify
, a survey was conducted by
BBC
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the BBC
, England that survey revealed that 90% people are associated with each other
throgh
from beginning to end
through
online
communication
. There are
also
some downsides of online
communication
. To commence with,
masses
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the masses
could misguide through
such
communication
because there is a too much information on the
internet
which is not fully appropriate that can distract to people in some ways. Apart from
this
, there are millions of people who make friends through online
communicatio
the activity of communicating; the activity of conveying information
communication
. Those people can come across fake individuals that can become
grave concern
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a grave concern
for them.
Besides
this
, because of following other lifestyles, their own
culture
and tradition would be
dissappeared
get lost, as without warning or explanation
disappeared
. For
instanc
an occurrence of something
instance
instances
,
acient
belonging to times long past especially of the historical period before the fall of the Western Roman Empire
ancient
people are adopting western
culture
owing to
this
fact,
acient
belonging to times long past especially of the historical period before the fall of the Western Roman Empire
ancient
culture
is
dissappearing
the act of leaving secretly or without explanation
disappearing
. To sum up, online
communication
has both merits and demerits. According to my point of view, its pros outweigh cons of
this
development.
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