People think that countries should produce foods that their population eats and import less food as much as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In modern life, the increase in transportation makes transportation easier, so it is really easy to transport products. It is said that internal goods must be produced for the needs of the people. In my opinion, I partly agree with
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issue. On the one hand, there is some advantages side of developing economic and environment of the country.
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, the locally grown food is more safety as it does not need to transport in a long time, so it will not contain chemical preservatives. The native speakers are able to consume the fresh meats and vegetables, which are transported directly from the farms to the markets.
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, the agriculture is a very safe for the environment.
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, the cattle raise for milk production, their manure would be used to fertilize the plants to grow better. It creates a closed process in agriculture.
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would ensure to the minimize the impacts on the environment. Japan is the country that controls their population eats and import less as much as possible.
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, there is a significant amount of positive of imported goods.
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with, people nowadays have tended to consume the imported products because it brings more vitamins and proteins which are better for their health than the locally grown food.
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, the Noni fruit from the United State can prevent the buyers from all health problems and even the cancer. As the external goods are raising in the present, the national economy will decrease in
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trend.
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, the carbon dioxide will be emitted into the atmosphere by the shipping vehicles and really harmful for the residents, so they would cause from the lung problems. To sum up, consuming the nation products are really good, maintain and improve the state budget,
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, the oversea food is
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needed need for the residents' health.
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