Some working parents think that childcare centres provide the best care for children who are still too young to go to school. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In current society, various parents spend the huge majority of their time by working,

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they cannot sit with their children. Those who prefer care through childcare centres due to various reasons.

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, they have those who responsibility about the child

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. They have other children and will improve with them because they are connected to an environment of the same age. They will learn more from each other.

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, there are tools for playing and after finishing them, they will teach to put them in their designated places. In

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behaviour, the child learns to arrange.

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, working parents think that their grandparents are the best for their children because they are safer for them, they will treat them well. Some families don’t have money to pay for the care centre. They will

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acquire the teachings of religion,

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.g. Grandparents remember God a lot, they will teach children to pronounce the same as in the name of Allah most compassionate most merciful before eating. Grandparents will be keen on the child as they have been keen on raising their children before. To conclude,

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there are various options

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. I believe childcare centres are

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since they will prepare them to deal with strangers for the coming years,

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as school. Staff will understand the children’s requirements according to what they have studied, and concerned with encouraging them to grow their ideas and demonstrate their creativity.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

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Grammatical Range: 6.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

childcare centres
early child development
professional care
nurturing environment
family values
emotional stability
personalized attention
socialization skills
care styles
set routines
discipline
flexible schedules
peer interaction
professional training
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