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Some working parents think that childcare centres provide the best care for children who are still too young to go to school. Other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their children. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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In current society, various parents spend the huge majority of their time by working,
thus
 they cannot sit with their children. Those who prefer care through childcare centres due to various reasons.
Firstly
, they have those who responsibility about the child
in particular
. They have other children and will improve with them because they are connected to an environment of the same age. They will learn more from each other.
In addition
, there are tools for playing and after finishing them, they will teach to put them in their designated places. In
this
 behaviour, the child learns to arrange.
On the contrary
, working parents think that their grandparents are the best for their children because they are safer for them, they will treat them well. Some families don’t have money to pay for the care centre. They will
also
 acquire the teachings of religion,
e
plural of "I"
we
.g. Grandparents remember God a lot, they will teach children to pronounce the same as in the name of Allah most compassionate most merciful before eating. Grandparents will be keen on the child as they have been keen on raising their children before. To conclude,
although
 there are various options
on
Suggestion
for
childcare
Suggestion
child care
. I believe childcare centres are
effective option
Suggestion
an effective option
effective options
 since they will prepare them to deal with strangers for the coming years,
such
 as school. Staff will understand the children’s requirements according to what they have studied, and concerned with encouraging them to grow their ideas and demonstrate their creativity.
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