some people think that having people from different nationalities and cultural backgrounds living together in the same country makes the country develop faster. do you agree or disagree?

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Different nationalities and cultural backgrounds are all around the

world

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. In every country the people living together and

thats

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that's

how their lives are more

interesthing

arousing or holding the attention

interesting

and easy going.

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During

this

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days

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day

, the

world

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become open map and every human being looking for

better life

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a better life

lote

(often followed by 'of') a large number or amount or extent

lot

list

lots

of people

prefered

made ready or fit or suitable beforehand

prepared

preferred

to be an

imigrants

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immigrant

immigrants

and living in the other place

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the

world

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because the economic situation is better than their home countries.The cultural

backgound

a person's social heritage: previous experience or training

background

is colourful and every

nations

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nation

have

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has

their habits, good or bad. I agree with

this

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, that living in one place together, make the country develop faster.Every

nations

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nation

are

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better in her own way in a different things and situations.The

tresures

accumulated wealth in the form of money or jewels etc.

treasure

treasures

of their

langwiches

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, hobbies, interests and

knolige helping

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knowledge, helping

knowledge helping

people to learn things from other culture.

Friendship

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The friendship

from

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the different nations sometimes is getting stronger, and the families got mixed. Everybody is helping

eachother

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each other

like a

naghbors

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colieges

an associate that one works with

colleagues

or friends.Food is the other good point of different taste and cousin in the

world

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.A lot of cultural background

open

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opens

their

restorants

a building where people go to eat

restaurants

restaurant

where you can try

delishious kithen

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the delicious kitchen

delicious kithen

delicious kitchen

delishious kitchen

Thats

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That's

how the economics develop and earn more money from that

bussines

a commercial or industrial enterprise and the people who constitute it

business

. I disagree with

this

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sentence as well.More

diferent

unlike in nature or quality or form or degree

different

culturies

a particular society at a particular time and place

cultures

clitoris

creatures

can be

problem

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problematic

becouse

for the reason that; on account of

because

of their bad habits.If we take the

religios

a strong belief in a supernatural power or powers that control human destiny

religions

religious

religion

we can find very positive and negative points.In one

muslim

of or relating to or supporting Islamism

Muslim

family they

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family, they

have to pray five times per day in the every 3

hour

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hours

.Like I

sad

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said, this

said this

this

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can be disliked from the other

ethnicity

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ethnic

groops

any number of entities (members) considered as a unit

groups

grapes

like a

christians

a religious person who believes Jesus is the Christ and who is a member of a Christian denomination

Christian

christian

.The other problems can be

their

belonging to them

theirs

looks like.In Turkey the

womens

an adult female person (as opposed to a man)

women

women's

wear

burka

a motor vehicle with two wheels and a strong frame

bike

from the

yang

any immature animal

young

girls.Their national

clouths

clothing in general

clothes

cloths

slots

are to not

showing

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show

to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits

too

much skin and in some small towns the only part you can see is their eyes.

This

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tipicul

exhibiting the qualities or characteristics that identify a group or kind or category

typical

topical

typically

national

things

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thing

can disturbing others. The

world

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colorfull

having striking color

colourful

and people are happy to learn and

invistigate

investigate scientifically

investigate

new

chalanges

take exception to

challenges

challenge

challengers

.The economics work better and different

circumstences

your overall circumstances or condition in life (including everything that happens to you)

circumstances

make

lifes

a characteristic state or mode of living

life

more interesting.Everybody

have

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has

lurn

gain knowledge or skills

learn

from others how to be better persons and take only the good things from their lives.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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some people think that having people from different nationalities and cultural backgrounds living together in the same country makes the country develop faster. do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

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