Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say the only way to increase recycling is for government to make it a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make a people recycle more of their waste?

#people #waste #homes #government #requirement #laws

Everyday

Suggestion

Every day

I am

writting

the act of creating written works

writing

pragragh

one of several distinct subdivisions of a text intended to separate ideas; the beginning is usually marked by a new indented line

paragraph

for improving my ielts writing exam as per my

wife

Suggestion

wife's

direction.After writing I provide her for checking. I

dont

do not

don't

know is she checking or not. Day before yesterday she checked out, yesterday I shared two

paraghaph but

Suggestion

paragraphs, but

paragraphs but

paragraph but

she

didnt

did not

didn't

any comments. Married life is so tough to

maintan

keep in a certain state, position, or activity; e.g., "keep clean"

maintain

couple

Suggestion

the couple

couples

a couple

are not same

mentality

Suggestion

mentally

. If I go to

usa

Suggestion

USA

use

canada

a nation in northern North America; the French were the first Europeans to settle in mainland Canada

Canada

I will earn more

yesterday one

Accept comma addition

yesterday, one

of my senior brother told from his own

experience thats why

Suggestion

experience, that's why

experience that's why

everybody want to go

usa

Suggestion

USA

also

. To get

USA

visa is not easy one of my familiar person age will be minimum 48years he is trying more than 8 years but

didnt

did not

didn't

get

usa

Suggestion

USA

visa.He has lots of

money but

Accept comma addition

money, but

didnt

did not

didn't

manage it. For getting

usa

Suggestion

USA

visa, purpose will have to be

study

Suggestion

studied

or research related so that by utilizing them they can develop their

county

a politically organized body of people under a single government

country

.Going to

usa

put into service; make work or employ for a particular purpose or for its inherent or natural purpose

use

USA

is my dream

Accept space

I want to travel whole

usa

put into service; make work or employ for a particular purpose or for its inherent or natural purpose

use

USA

Accept space

want to see with my own eyes.May Allah

fullfil

put in effect

fulfil

fulfilled

my dream.

Mon Mar 30 2020

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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0Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
27Grammar mistakes
 

1 paragraphs

169 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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Sustainability
Environmental stewardship
Recycling initiatives
Waste management
Mandatory regulations
Compliance and enforcement
Recyclable materials
Circular economy
Landfill diversion
Conservation
Greenhouse gas emissions
Sanitation services
Public policy
Behavioral change
Eco-consciousness
Resource recovery
Single-stream recycling
Waste hierarchy
Economic incentives
Ecological footprint

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