People can perform everyday tasks, such as shopping and banking as well as business transactions, without meeting other people face to face what are the effects of this on individual and society as a whole?

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Nowadays, technology is playing very crucial role in the life of people. People can do daily tasks, like shopping and banking as well as trade transactions from the
home
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without gathering with the people. There are both positive as well as the negative impact of
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personally as well as on the community as a whole. But the positive influence is outweighing the negative, both the effects are
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justified. Discussing the positive effects, the foremost important is the
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methods are becoming faster than before due to technological development. The modern methods are less complicated as well as less time consuming as compared to the past. Due to the less complicated majority of people can learn it easily and apply it.
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, everyone can operate it from
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, so there issues. Like, in recent majority of banks have the online
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facilities, so most of people use it from
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and quickly rather than going there and security is
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provided by them.
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, in some conditions when we cannot go out of the
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it helps in
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situation in buying things as well as a monetary
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in business from
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.
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, a few days ago the Corona was affecting the world,
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government declared the lock down, in
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situation it helped in purchasing things online as well as some businessmen did the business from
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home which
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home, which
helped to not to fell down more economy of the country as well as provided food and house necessary things to
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. On the other side, some old people who do not understand how to use it, they cannot use it so they have to tell somebody else who help them due to
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they feel dependent on someone else as well as they think they are not suitable for
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modern era. Overall, it can be concluded, there are many advantages and effects of the modern technology which helps to do money
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and shopping online.
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, there is one disadvantage in my perception. But the positive effects outweigh negative.
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