Doctors should be responsible for educating their patients about how to improve their health. Do you agree with this?

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Nowadays, the question of whether physicians should be responsible for educating their patients on how to improve their

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or not has been receiving a great deal of public attention.

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issue is caused by many reasons, there are not without workable solutions for that. There are convincing reasons why doctors should take responsibility for tailor

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to the patient.

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, since physicians have to go through the process of qualified education and training, their

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will more reliable than any source of

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. In fact, physicians have been at least 6 years of academic training about their major

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as diagnosis, treatment, which helps them the knowledge of medicine to give careful

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, by searching for

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curative online, patients able to put them in danger.

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means that the source of

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on the Internet ar

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ften misleading or bad

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, which makes worsen their

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situations.

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, the disadvantage of the trend should be taken into account more.

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, for the examination to be completed for all patients registered in a day, the hospital will have a team of consultants to replace the

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consultation process.

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, after receiving a medical report from the

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ill be trained intensively to be able to read and understand the

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, medical record of patients

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as doctors, which helps patients to better understand their

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, if doctors have to do many things at the same time, it will affect the quality of work go down.

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means that a

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has to examine many patients in a day, they will not have enough time to be able to advise carefully because it takes so long, the

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will have to examine other waiting patients,

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will affect the patients’

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results are not good. In conclusion, I disagree with

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issue as doctors are experienced and gain training about patient care. By playing an indispensable role improve patients’ fitness

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Topic Vocabulary:

holistic approach
preventive measures
chronic diseases
medical interventions
healthcare professionals
consultations
dietitians
health educators
literacy skills
visual aids
digital tools
reputable online resources
community programs
ongoing support
patient outcomes
initial guidance
mitigated
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Doctors should be responsible for educating their patients about how to improve their health. Do you agree with this?

Your opinion

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