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Today, most people get married and give birth in their thirties rather than when they are younger. Is it a positive or negative development in your opinion? To what extent do you support this development?

#people #birth #thirties #development #support
Getting married is considered
very important part
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a very important part
very important parts
 of our life, nowadays
colossal number
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the colossal number
a colossal number
 of people prefer to get married and give
birth
 in their thirties and not at their
career
 building
age
. Is it not a matter of concern for the society?
I
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Me
, assert that it is more beneficial to get married at an early stage of life
for
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of
 an individual and the society as well. It is widely acknowledged that couples who get married in their twenties, tend to share
more effective bond
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a more effective bond
the more effective bond
 with their spouse and the entire family. More specifically, at an early
age
, both parties will not be that mature and can easily adapt the rituals and habits of the other person.
Moreover
, it is not very difficult to get engaged or to shape a relation because there is no space for ego.
Next
, giving
birth
 at a young
age
 is extremely boon for a
women
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woman
. Particularly, it reduces the risk of health issues. Going through the process of pregnancy and later giving
birth
 at the
age
 of thirties can strike to various medical calls.
However
, in modern-day-society, present generation
give
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gives
 more weightage to their
career
 goals. Specifically, they desire to focus in building their professional life. To be more exact, they consider their early
age
, the
age
 of constructing the blocks to stand a building. They assume early marriage and
child
the parturition process in human beings; having a baby; the process of giving birth to a child
childbirth
birth
, a waste of their qualification and young energy. They are not aware of the consequences, they will face because of giving more preference to
career
 and non ability to maintain a balance between marriage and
career
. To recapitulate, I believe that getting into the sacred bond of marriage and giving
birth
 to the sunshine and star of the family at an early
age
 is an appropriate decision. I

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