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the average time and money spent at different type of restourants.

#time #money #type #restourants
The table shows
comparison
Suggestion
a comparison
 of the
avarage
approximating the statistical norm or average or expected value
average
averages
time
 and
money
 spent at
diferent
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
type
 of
restourants
a building where people go to eat
restaurants
restaurant
restraint
, It will discuss into two sections, which are
time
Accept comma addition
time, then
then
next
 is
money
 that people used to
spent
Suggestion
spend
 in every each
type
 of
restourant
a building where people go to eat
restaurant
restraint
restaurants
.
First
 passage is about
time
, as we can see the
avarage
approximating the statistical norm or average or expected value
average
time
 that people spent in
restourant
a building where people go to eat
restaurants
restraint
 always
increased according
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increased, according
 to luxury
type
 of
restourant
a building where people go to eat
restaurant
restraint
restaurants
, the fastest
time
 owned by fast-food
restourant
a building where people go to eat
restaurants
restaurant
, and the longest owned by sit-down
restourant
a building where people go to eat
restaurant
restaurants
. And
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
 thing is level of increase is measured significant.
Futuremore
in addition
Furthermore
Future more
 is about
money
, overall the expense for every
type
 of
restourant
a building where people go to eat
restaurant
restraint
 is increases depending on
luxury
Suggestion
the luxury type
type
 of
restourant
a building where people go to eat
restaurant
restraint
restaurants
, people spent highest
money
 at
sit-down
Suggestion
a sit-down restaurant
sit-down restaurant
sit-down restaurants
restourant
 and the cheapest at fast-food
restourant
a building where people go to eat
restaurants
restaurant
. In conclusion, we able see that people spent less
money
 and
time
 for the fast-food
restourant
a building where people go to eat
restaurant
restaurants
type
, and people would like to
spent
Suggestion
spend
 more
money
 and
time
 for sit-down
restourant
a building where people go to eat
restaurant
restaurants
.
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