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The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates forest area in hectares divided
in
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 six parts of the world in the years 1990, 2000,
2005
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and 2005
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. in 1990
Europe
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 and South
America
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 had the vast majority of forested land respectively 989 and 946
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millions
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million
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of
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ha,
on the other
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hand
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 Oceania had the fewest
one
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 in the same year, only 199
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millions
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million
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of
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ha.
The other
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Other
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 countries like Africa, North
America
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 and
Asia
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remais
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remains
remain
 in the middle with 749, 708 and 576
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millions
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million
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of
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ha. In 2000, all the countries had big or
less
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 losses,
in
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contrast
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Europe
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 was the only
one
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 that improved her lands adding 9 million
of
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hectars
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hectares
 for a total of 998. In 2005, North
America
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 and Oceania stay
with
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 almost the same areas
than
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as
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 five years before, 705 for the first
one
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 and from 198 to 197 for the
second
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one
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.
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, Africa and South
America
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 lost again some
millions
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 of
hectars
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hectares
 (respectively from 709 to 691 and from 904 to 882).
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contrast
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Europe
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 and
Asia
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 higher their forested land in five years (
in particular
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Asia
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 from 570 to 584, meanwhile
Europe
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 from 998 to 1001). In conclusion,
Europe
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 always develop some new forested areas,
Asia
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 only from 2000 to 2005,
altrough
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although
 the
oterh
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other
 countries always ream steady or decrease their
millions
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 of
hectars
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hectares
 of
lands
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land
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.

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words europe, america, millions, one, asia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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