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The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows forested land in millions of hectares in different parts of the world. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The table illustrates the forest area in
hectares
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 divided into six parts of the world in the years 1990, 2000,
2005
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and 2005
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. In 1990
Europe
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 and South
America
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 had the vast majority of forested land respectively 989 and 946 million
of
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ha,
on the other
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hand
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 Oceania had the little one in the same year, only 199
millions
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million
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of
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ha.
The other
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Other
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 countries like Africa, North
America
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 and
Asia
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remains
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remain
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 in the middle with 749, 708 and 576 million
of
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ha. In 2000, all the countries had, big or
less
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fewer
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 losses,
in contrast
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,
Europe
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 was the only
that
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one that
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 improved
her
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its
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 lands, adding 9 million
of
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hectares
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 for a total of 998. In 2005, North
America
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 and Oceania stay
with
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in
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 almost the same areas
than
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as
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 five years before, 705 for the first
from
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and from
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 198 to 197 for the
second
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 one.
Therefore
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, Africa and South
America
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 lost again some millions of
hectares
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 (respectively from 709 to 691 and from 904 to 882).
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,
Europe
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 and
Asia
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 higher their forested land in five years (
in particular
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Asia
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 from 570 to 584, meanwhile
Europe
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 from 998 to 1001). In conclusion,
Europe
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 always develop some new forested areas,
Asia
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 only from 2000 to 2005,
although
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 the other countries always ream steady or decrease their millions of
hectares
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 of
lands
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land
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.

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