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Some people prefer shopping in shopping centres while others prefer weekend markets. What are the advantages of each? Which shopping experience do you prefer?

#people #centres #weekend #markets
It is
ofter
many times at short intervals
often
 said that Owi night
market
 has a
lot
 of things to buy. One
such
 example is that we can buy clothes
such
 as
undershirt
wacoal
Suggestion
Wacoal
,
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,
long jeans
,
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,
white skirt
,
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,
sneakers nike
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sneakers, Nike
sneakers Nike
,
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,
black socks
,
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,
red dress and
adidas
Suggestion
Adidas
 slipper.
Also
,
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,
We can buy foods
such
 as
som
quantifier; used with either mass nouns or plural count nouns to indicate an unspecified number or quantity
some
tum
an instance or single occasion for some event
time
teams
,
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,
khao
Suggestion
Khao
 man
kai
Suggestion
Kai
,
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,
pad
thai
a native or inhabitant of Thailand
Thai
,
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,
congee
 with pork
,
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,
fried chicken
,
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,
pan-steamed mussels
,
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,
spicy noodle salad
,
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,
dumpling and fish cake.
Besides
,
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,
We can buy accessories
such
 as sunglasses
,
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,
necklace
,
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,
watch
,
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,
hair band
,
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,
Jacket
,
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,
belt
,
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,
earring bracelet
,
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,
stocking
,
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,
handbag and bow. One of the most striking features is that we can do a
lot
 of activities at Owl night
market
.Fitness
center
Suggestion
Center
,
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,
small animal
such
 as persian cat
,
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,
goldfish
,
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,
kitten
,
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,
hamster
,
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,
parrot
,
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,
puppy
,
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,
porcupine
,
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,
rabbit
,
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,
turtle and eagle.We can sell a
lot
 of things
such
at
Suggestion
as
second
 hand clothes
,
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,
second
 hand thing
such
 as shoes
,
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,
trainer
,
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,
aloha shirt
,
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,
ring
Suggestion
ringer
,
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,
hat
,
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,
belt
,
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,
earrings
,
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,
glasses and heck lace.We can do happy
such
 as play in the theme park
such
 as big dipping
,
Accept space
,
giant swing boat
,
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,
bumper car
,
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,
hunnted
having or showing excessive or compulsive concern with something
haunted
hunted
 house and carousel. It is
wall
a deep hole or shaft dug or drilled to obtain water or oil or gas or brine
well
 – known fact that we can take electric train
mrt
an area in a town where a public mercantile establishment is set up
mart
 at Own night
market
.One
instance could
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instance, could
 be is a
market
 in the heart of the city of Nonthaburi
,
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,
with everything. Apart from
this
,
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,
we can convenient to travel in many
ways
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ways, such
such
 as cars
,
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,
minibus
,
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,
taxis
,
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,
motorbikes
,
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,
electric train.
Finally
,
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,
we
can there
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can, there
 are a
lot
 of
produts
commodities offered for sale
products
predators
 here. There are more than a hundred stores, so you can buy thing to use
,
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,
eat
,
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,
clothes
,
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,
secondhand
Suggestion
second hand
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