Scientific research should be carried out and controlled by the governments rather than private companies. Do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, governments carry out and control most of scientific researches in the world

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of private companies.

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, some people think, that private companies should take care and control of scientific researches. I agree with the point of that,

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should supervise all the scientific researches. The private enterprises argues that interference of states to researches makes scientific progress much slower, but there are some dangers in

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view.

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of all, private corporations value their profits, and will try to manipulate with researches, sacrificing security policies of scientific researches leading to harm products. There have been many cases, which proves

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danger,

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developing drugs or weapons.

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danger that could come is

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hurrying that leads to uncontrollable situations,

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as genetically modified people. Talking about governments,

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need to be said that

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has too many obligations. Controlling all the sectors, including scientific researches are hard and time consuming.

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, allocated resources of

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might be insufficient, because states

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funding other public spending.

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, researches carried out by

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set high standard for their product. The

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will consider all the nuances, and will test product several times in many different situations.

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, vaccines researching carried by

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have a long period of testing, before production.

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, the

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will prioritize researches, considering the needs of society and

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itself. One example is the development of renewable energy to meet ecological issues. In conclusion, I strongly agree with the point of view, that

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should take responsibility for all scientific research.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

257 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

scientific research
carried out
controlled
governments
private companies
unbiased
prioritize
profit
public interest
allocate resources
lucrative
collaboration
information sharing
confidential
competitive advantage

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