Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema.

It is argued
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pointing out something
that
, the people now-days are able to watch films and movies in their mobiles or tables and there is no reason to go to the
movie
theater
a building where theatrical performances or motion-picture shows can be presented
theatre
.
However
, others believe that if you want enjoying of the films It must to
seen
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see
in especial places like cinemas.
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From
were
In or at or to what place
where
I stand, watching the films in the exact place is really
more excitement
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more exciting
than
spent
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spending
spend
time for it at home.
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On
the one hand, some people think that see the film on their mobiles or tablets is better than going to the
cimema
a medium that disseminates moving pictures
cinema
. In
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
world
,
Accept space
,
watching the films at home is more comfortable because, it is not important How we want seat or what we should Wear while watching.
for
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For
example, some people prefer to watch films when they want
relaxing
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to relax
on the bed.
furthermore
in addition
Furthermore
, watching
movie
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movies
a movie
the movie
on your phones or tablets, make
It
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Its
possible to eat what you like is cheaper than something you will buy by
force
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forces
a force
such
as
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a light informal meal
snacks
and drinks from there.
for
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For
instane
an occurrence of something
instance
, in order to go to the Cinema We have to take a taxi or driving to the destination.
On the other hand
, It is so clear, when you are watching films in the
cinema it will
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cinema, it will
gives
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give
you the full
enjoyments
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enjoyment
and emotions, because Cinemas were
constracted
make by combining materials and parts
constructed
contracted
contacted
by special equipments with high technology machines and sound systems
wich
interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class
which
can make the people more engaged and connected to the
movie
. Another reason why people like to see movies in the cinema is to avoid the interruption that may occur if they watching it on their phones or tablets.
for
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For
example, some cinemas put the special equipment to jam the mobile networks. So once you entered
to
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into
in
the hall you cannot receive a call. In
canclusion
a position or opinion or judgment reached after consideration
conclusion
conclusions
consolation
, some
people
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peoples
attention more to watch
movie
in their
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electronic equipment that converts sound into electrical signals that can be transmitted over distances and then converts received signals back into sounds
phones
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pens
or
tabletsto
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tablets to
but there is another group say that, It is so necessary the movies seen in the cinemas In my
opinion if
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opinion, if
you want spend your time for Films don't hesitate to watch it in the right place.
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  • Convenience
  • Mobile Viewing
  • Cost-efficient
  • Time-efficient
  • Personalized experience
  • Immersive
  • Cinematic experience
  • Surround sound
  • Collective experience
  • Technical superiority
  • Sensory experience
  • Social hubs
  • Cultural events
  • Distractions
  • Preservation
  • Filmmaking art
  • Cinematographic nuances
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