People say that a child’s success is dependent on the way parents bring them up. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

At present we can see or hear that most young people are not so successful as their parents all over the world. At the same time, people suggest that a child's
success
is dependent on the
way
parents bring them up. Personally, I agree with
this
opinion and it will be discussed why.
To begin
with, the highest role in a child's
success
plays their parents and the
way
bring them up, because the most children love repeat that did their parents.
In addition
, the parents must be responsible for their children since a young age.
For instance
, statistics all over the world shows that at present, many young people go into negative ways and one of the main reasons is following; not enough attention, their behaviour in society, attention to the environment and the
way
bring them up.
Furthermore
, children or young people who are not enough brought up by their parents can be a society problem (like a thief).
In contrast
, there are a lot of young people who achieve the
success
when they were only 18 or 19 years old, because they were brought up since a childhood.
For example
, a singer Billie Ellis, who is 19 years old but famous all over the world
then
other ones.
Moreover
, she says that no one becomes successful if he (or she) do not improve himself (or herself)
also
she added that the role of parents is larger
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
others. To sum up all above mentioned opinions or suggestions we can say that child's
success
is dependent on the
way
bring them up
also
the environment where they live.
Likewise
,
success
will not come to you if you do not work on yourself hard without stoping.
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