One of the major problems that faces today’s governments is creating enough satisfactory housing for their increasing populations whilst still trying to protect the environment. Discuss this statement and give your opinion.

With ever increasing
population
of most of the countries, it becomes vital for the governments
to provide
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provide
sufficient living spaces for their people, while still maintaining the natural habitat. Is it possible to build a concrete jungle for inhabitants without disturbing the environment? In
this
essay we will discuss more about
this
contentious issue and will draw and inference. I opine that if legislations plan these housings effectively than they can provide satisfactory shelters
to
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for
their
population
alongwith
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along with
the protection of the environment. Building houses
has
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have
direct impact on nature. After all,
this
space has to be
build
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built
on land, which is made available by impacting the nature. Whenever, people get
place
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a place
to live, thousands of
tress
a tall perennial woody plant having a main trunk and branches forming a distinct elevated crown; includes both gymnosperms and angiosperms
trees
are cut to
made
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make
that land available,
therefore
, resulting in deforestation.
This
all ultimately has dire consequences on
whole living community
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the whole living community
.Geological department of Ontario university has published recently that man-made jungles have replaced the real jungles, resulting in unusual natural
disastors
a state of extreme (usually irremediable) ruin and misfortune
disasters
like floods, famines, extinction of many species of plants and animals. It becomes
ultimate responsibility
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the ultimate responsibility
of every country's union to protect the natural space while building space for their personnel. Unless, land acquisition is not controlled, the disaster will continue to happen.
Hence
, many nations
has come
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have come
up with solution of building houses on
heights
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the heights
,
scyscrappers
a very tall building with many stories
skyscrapers
are the result of
this
, which in turn has addressed
this
issue to an extent, but
population
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the population
is on
continous rise
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a continuous rise
continuous rise
continues rise
. We need to find more effective
environmental
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environmentally
friendly solutions. Its not only union's
problem but
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problem, but
ours too. To recapitulate, having mulled over above stated arguments and information, and deliberating all the facts carefully, it can be deducted that, increasing
number
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numbers
in
population
and their housing facility has
certaily
definitely or positively ('sure' is sometimes used informally for 'surely')
certainly
become a worry globally.
in
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In
my opinion, we need to come forward to help out
govenment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
to solve
this
issue.
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