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Some believe that spoken communication is always more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people maintain that
communication
 which happens
face
-to-
face
 is always stronger than a written one. I agree with
this
 notion to some extent, but written
communication
also
 has some benefits and it can be more powerful. In numerous situations
face
 to
face
communication
 is more useful and has more favourable effects. In
this
 kind of
communication
 eye contact is a vital factor since people can realize from somebody's eyes whether he or she are serious or not. Body language and tone of the voice can be affected too. When talking to someone in person, they have to answer.
fo
r i
Suggestion
For
nstance, when a teacher asks a student a question
fa
ce-to-
Accept comma addition
face-to-face, they
face
 they have to answer in another form that pupils may not respond watching the peoples' reaction while talking to them and makes it possible to change behaviour and tone of the voice according to their reaction.
However
, written
communication
 is needed, some conditions. Being shy is one of these circumstances. Plethora of individuals cannot speak their minds because they might be shy or embarrassed to talk during the talking
face
 to
face
. Namely, with
this
 kind of
communication
 people are able to have an impact on others in the future and tell them how do they feel and give orders to do some other things. In some cases there is no
communication
,
therefore
 the
communication
 should be through written ones. All in all, there are various categories of
communication
 but most of the time talking in person is more powerful some other times it is better to keep in touch through letter or social media
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