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Some people think that young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc.to serve society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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People tend to have different opinions on
education system
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education systems
the education system
 and impose them on their younger generations.
However
, in my
opnion I
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opinion, I
opinion I
 would encourage young people
go
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to go
 to University to
further
 their
education
 perhaps if
one
 is interested. In a country like India,
education
 plays a vital role in the society where parents make their children complete the graduation despite their financial crisis.
This
 would make the younger
one
 stand at a bigger pace. On the brighter side,
education
 can help the young
obe
used of a single unit or thing; not two or more
one
be
 expose to different opportunities than sticking to
one
statuatory
relating to or created by statutes
statutory
 domain. An educated person, who develops his skills in order to settle in better career will
also
 strive in improving
country's economy
Suggestion
the country's economy
.
For instance
, there was no
such
 incident where a person was pointed saying that
education
 ruined his life. Despite of the number of chances a person would get after
education
, he might rather stand suggestive for his
next
 generations. On the other side, there were many who settled themselves as car mechanics or builders for two reasons: responsibilities or lack of interest in
education
. These kind of jobs gives low wages which are not encouraging to continue the journey. A low wage job gives a difficult
living though
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living, though
 he might be serving the society.
This
 makes the future generation to settle earlier like the
one
 and the cycle continues. To conclude, young
one
 should choose to continue
education
 than settling as a car mechanic etc.
One
 can volunteer
being
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to be
 a car mechanic or builder as a part-time or on a weekly basis.
This
 would improve the income as well as
satisfy
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to satisfy
satisfying
 the
desite
the feeling that accompanies an unsatisfied state
desire
 of serving.

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