Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Is this a positive or negative development?

Advancement in
technology
has changed the way we communicated. It affected the
type
of interaction people has now compared to
past
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the past
, now they are making virtual friends and
relationship
on
internet
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the internet
. It is often debated that what
type
of
development
it is. Some
says
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say
it is
an
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a
negative
development
due to
distance
it created among them. In my opinion,
this
is a positive
development
because they can talk with others
inrespective
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in respective
of
distance
.
To begin
with, the
type
of
relationship
between people has been changed due to
technology
. In the past, humans
meet
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met
with each other and
thats
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that's
how they talked and become friends.
However
, now a days with
advancement
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the advancement
of
technology
, they meet various unknown people via social media app like
facebook
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Facebook
and
whatsapp
and become virtual friends. To illustrate with an example
,
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,
accrding
(followed by 'to') in agreement with or accordant with
according
to a survey,
majority
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the majority
a majority
of people
agrees
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agree
that the
type
of
relationship
has been changed due to the
technology
. Some argued that
this
advancement has
detrimental effect
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a detrimental effect
detrimental effects
as they hardly meet with each other. Now all conversation happened on phone via various social media apps which creates the
distance
between people and they get
very less chance
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a very less chance
to get one-to-one communication.
However
, others, including me, believe that,
this
is a positive
development
as it gives chance people to communicate with friends and relative
inrespective
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in respective
of
distance
. We have many friends and relatives who
sattled
established or decided beyond dispute or doubt
settled
in abroad,
technology
gives
opportunity
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an opportunity
to talk with them which was not possible in
past
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the past
. To conclude,
technology
changed the
type
of
relationship
as people are more into making virtual friends. Some
people though
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people, though
this
is
negative
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a negative development
development
as it creates
distance
between
people
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people, however
however
others, including me, believe
this
is a positive
development
as it gives us
chance
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a chance
the chance
to communicate with friends
inrespective
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in respective
of
distance
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Interact
  • Social media platforms
  • Networking
  • Instant messaging
  • Face-to-face interaction
  • Misunderstandings
  • Emotional context
  • Superficial connections
  • Deceptive identities
  • Privacy concerns
  • Social skills
  • Video calls
  • Online presence
  • Digital communication
  • Cyber relationships
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