Some people say that modern innovations bring a lot more problems than benefits? Do you agree or disagree?

The entire world has been revolutionized due to the advancement in the technology.
However
, some people perceive that
this
automation affected a
person
’s life which gives l
arge amount
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the larger amount
larger amount
a larger amount
of an unfavourable impact than the positive points. I strongly support them and supporting arguments are discussed in the
further
paragraphs.
To begin
with, the foremost negative point is that with the innovation in the computers many tasks has been completed in a single click.
This
will be resulted in
person
has to do less physical activity to perform some work.
For example
, with the
use
of the Internet it would be easy to buy kitchen stuff in a single click whereas in the past, a
person
had to went to the market and they buy their g
rocery.
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groceries
Moreover
, by continuing
this
type of lifestyle affects a
p
erson
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person's
physical health which would be converted in the obesity and as time pasts
this
would be converted in more decease
such
as diabetes, heart problems.
Thus
,
this
electronic device has made a
p
erson
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person's
life easier and converted them in a l
ezzy
moving slowly and gently
lazy
person
.
Furthermore
, the technology having d
iver impact
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a diver impact
on the many parts of the manufacturing units as they started to
use
robots,
that is
used to control the machine.
As a result
,
this
trade requires a less amount of human power which would be resulted in the unemployment in the nation.
For instance
, Research conducted shows that by the end of 21st c
entury thirty
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century, thirty
percent people become an unemployed as having latest machinery are available in the many production units. At
last
,
u
se
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the use
of the electronic gadgets has been elaborated rapidly.
This
will emit a certain g
as which
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gas, which
makes environment polluted.
Although
, the people a
re preferring
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prefer
to
use
such
appliances which completes our work with less e
fforts
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effort
and time. In conclusion, the modernized world has served the society in a better way as every task would be completed not only in less time but
also
in less effort and gives a better output. But it gives more detrimental effect on the health, employment and an environment
also
. The government s
hould has
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should have
to start c
ampaign
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campaigning
which delivers the information.

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