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Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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In modern society, many individuals have valued the role of spoken communication over that of written communication. From my perspective, I do subscribe to that view as interaction by own voices has more beneficial impacts on our daily lives.
Firstly
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, I believe that directly connecting with people around us
is
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are
 for sure an
indispensible
not to be dispensed with; essential
indispensable
 crucial factor of creating long-term networking.
Therefore
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, we enable to seize various opportunities to be
friend
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friendly
friendlier
 with strangers
instead
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 of gaining merely several chances due to utilizing written conversation method.
For instance
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, when I became a graduate
high-school
a public secondary school usually including grades 9 through 12
highschool
 student and enrolled in my university, there were
also
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 a lot of freshmen like me who had not immediately found a suitable camaraderie in
completely new environment
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a completely new environment
. Thanks to striking up face-to-face conversation with different students day by day, I find out who was well-matched to me and who was not. The reason is just by listening to their intrinsic emotional opinion and observing their real reactions, I naturally built close bond friendships for myself and had some good friends.
On the other hand
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, written communication restricts us from comprehending and sympathizing emotional feelings of one person, because we merely read what they write down without listening to their voices or watching their actions.
Secondly
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, spoken interaction brings
for
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to
 us a large number of soft skills
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 as critical thinking and leadership.
For example
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, when taking part in a discussion, by directly expressing our views in front of a large group of individuals and simultaneously waiting for their rebuttal, we can be able to practice critical thinking and quick response.
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, if we write our opinions down and send it, maybe everything will hang on for a long time until we receive the reply letter.
As a result
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, we will not be eager to dispute anymore and
this
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 online conversation will end quickly. In conclusion

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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