Intelligent robots will be more widely used in the future. Is this a blessing or a curse? What is your opinion?

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In the past people had to do almost all kinds of jobs,

however

, with the science and technology

progress our lives

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progress in our lives

have improved tremendously. Nowadays, robots have

becoming

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become

an integral part of our

lives

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life

and artificial intellectual machines

have increasingly replacing

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have increasingly been replacing

are increasingly replacing

have increasingly replaced

were increasingly replacing

have increasingly been replaced

were increasingly replaced

humans.

Although

, with

invent

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inventing

of robots, people spend much less time and efforts on some mechanical tasks, I believe

this

situation may

also

have a negative impact on our lives. On the one hand, of course, smart technologies, intelligent robots and artificial intellect are created to improve the quality of our lives, make them more relaxed, interesting and less stressful. Robots have been replacing humans on different plants and factories, restaurants, public areas and homes.

Thus

, it is difficult to imagine our lives without smart phones, watches, computers, vacuum and window cleaners, coffee machines, robots-chefs, drones, etc.

In addition

, to involve robots in different kinds of production processes

has becoming

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is becoming

has become

less costly than to hire the live employees, who demand the protection of their rights, medical insurance and working day limitation, a number of owners and managers who are willing to organize their business on machines work is increasing.

On the other hand

, the population of the Earth is continuously growing. Even today, when the machines just started to be popular, there are a huge amount of people who have no enough sources for surviving. In my opinion, there is a danger that it will be extremely difficult for a human being to find a job one day.

Moreover

, it

is wrong fully rely

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wrongfully relies

is wrongfully rely

on robots and machines when we speak about supply of life important services, as electricity, water, etc. In conclusion, it is obvious, that some kinds of jobs will

loose

fail to keep or to maintain; cease to have, either physically or in an abstract sense

lose

their actuality and machines will play a huge role in our lives,

however we

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However, we

However we

need to learn how to coexist with artificial intelligent robots and remember that we are their creatures and our intelligence goes

first

and it includes humanity to the people who live around.

Thus

, we need to think how to employ all citizens and give everyone a chance for a happy life.

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Intelligent robots will be more widely used in the future. Is this a blessing or a curse? What is your opinion?

Fully explain your ideas

In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

Some people think that we should replace old buildings and houses in cities with more modern buildings. Other people think we should protect old buildings. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some people think that it is more important to plant trees in open areas of town and cities than to build more housing . To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Overall, men are more satisfied with local conditions than women.