1.Global warming is one of the biggest threats to our environment. What causes global warming? What solutions are there to solve this problem? Please study the example and write your own essay. You can use information from the example, but in case you do, make sure to rework it.

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Nowadays the biggest earth struggling with temperature rise which is a matter of grave concern. The main problem of

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causes individuals' legislative conversation and society to significantly increase programs. The most viable solution

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to maintain the govt rules and not pollution in every sector as an industry.

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are used to talking about politics, there are various

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party. So, they did not think that our

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and lifestyle are caused by environmental influences.

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, with significant

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in rural society, our rural agricultural sector gradually declined because there were many problems.

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, authority services are often unprofessional, they sign construction project documents and the construction of new buildings suffers in many marginalized areas.

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, rural villages created by industrial projects or residential

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areas are shrinking day by day resulting in poorer economic sectors one day. To deal with

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solution, the government has provided rules to be implemented and maintained by the rural population. Both individuals and authority were equally important because the field was the most profitable sector, it grew the economy slowly and always needed a strong position. Some

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were always focused on harming the countryside so they were the main focus if no money was handed over to them. They know that

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is as big a global problem as increased pollution.

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, Dhaka is the number one polluted city in the world.

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, these city government employees do not maintain construction projects. When

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don't do enough research, they focus on

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and luxurious living abroad.

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, if a location always includes, trusted

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, our gloves and protect the environment. In conclusion,

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political legislation changed the conversation, it was important but followed by other countries, like a stadium or a community hall. Industry and govt they are anti-clockwise direction but if any field they, not a farmer work or does not have agricultural

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field is included by an industry.

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task achievement

You have good ideas and you attempted to address the topic, which shows an understanding of the issue of global warming.

coherence and cohesion

Your essay reflects an effort to discuss various aspects of societal problems, which can be developed into relevant examples with more focus.

Your opinion

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If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

328 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

greenhouse gas emissions
fossil fuels
deforestation
industrial processes
transportation
carbon dioxide
methane
nitrous oxide
urbanization
renewable energy sources
solar energy
wind energy
hydroelectric power
reforestation
energy efficiency
sustainable agriculture
eco-friendly practices
organic fertilizers
planting trees
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1.Global warming is one of the biggest threats to our environment. What causes global warming? What solutions are there to solve this problem? Please study the example and write your own essay. You can use information from the example, but in case you do, make sure to rework it.

Your opinion

In many professional sports, there is an increase in the number of athletes using banned substances to improve their performance. What are the causes of the phenomenon and what are some of the possible solutions?

With the increasing demand for energy sources of oil and gas, people should look for sources of oil and gas in remote and untouched natural places. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages of damaging such areas?

Cashless transaction order of the day most of the time people prefer using plastic cash do you think this is trend will be useful for the society.

If all workers in a company were paid exact same wage regardless of job role there would be much more harmony and cooperation between staff. To what extent do you agree or disagree?