Children are less active in their free time than in the past. Therefore, sports lessons must be compulsory in schools. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays minors are becoming less active than before at leisure
time
. Use synonyms
Therefore
, sports classes have to be obligatory Linking Words
at
schools. Even though attaching more importance to sports facilities are fairly expensive for government, Suggestion
in
sport
plays a significant role in people’s life. I will debate both sides of Use synonyms
argument
in Suggestion
an argument
the argument
this
essay.
On the one hand, providing with better sports facilities Linking Words
are
luxurious for government. If sports lessons are mandatory for school children, more educator of physical activities who have to be supplied with salary might work at schools which means Suggestion
is
extra expenditure
for Suggestion
an extra expenditure
authority
. Another expenditure of government will be constructing some contemporary sports complexes Use synonyms
such
as gym, pitch, swimming pools, cycle track, et cetera. Linking Words
Furthermore
, alternative solution in order to avoid being less active at spare Linking Words
time
minors may travel to short distance, Use synonyms
for
Linking Words
instance they
may visit their relative’s so as to assist housework. Accept comma addition
instance, they
However
, it will be more helpful to dedicate free Linking Words
time
for educational activity, since sports are considered as a waste of valuable study Use synonyms
time
. In my view, children might prefer to learn poems by heart or to deal with a crossword puzzle rather than playing football or swimming.
Use synonyms
On the other hand
, Linking Words
Use synonyms
sport
has a pivotal role in people’s life so as to build Suggestion
the sport
healthy lifestyle
. In fact, children’s health depends on their physical activities which are done at leisure or study Suggestion
a healthy lifestyle
healthy lifestyles
time
. Having and maintaining Use synonyms
healthy way
of life Suggestion
a healthy way
are
beneficial for both minors and Suggestion
is
authority
. Because, if people are healthier Use synonyms
adequately
, Suggestion
adequate
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authority
must not spend much money on medical care for Suggestion
the authority
population
. Suggestion
the population
a population
populations
Moreover
, Linking Words
sport
is another factor for minors to be well-being. In my opinion, many school children suffer Use synonyms
from sitting one
place without Suggestion
from sitting in one
movement
during classes that may affect their mental development as well. Suggestion
moving
Linking Words
Thus physical
lessons may be enforced in order to cause children’s mental well-being. Accept comma addition
Thus, physical
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Additionally
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Additionally, sport
sport
gives an opportunity for school children so as to learn how to follow discipline and work with others as a team.
Use synonyms
Therefore
, it will rational to conclude that sports lessons should be strengthened in order to make minors Linking Words
more physical
active Suggestion
more physically
now albeit
some expenditure which may be spent by Accept comma addition
now, albeit
Use synonyms
authority
. Because Suggestion
the authority
sport
is regarded as a significant activity so as to have Use synonyms
healthy and satisfied lifestyle
.Suggestion
a healthy and satisfied lifestyle
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