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Band 7.5

You have recently visited a city on vacation and stayed in a hotel. Write a letter to the manager about your stay. In your letter: - Give details of your stay - What were the high & low points of the hotel - What are your suggestions; recommendations and / or complaints about the hotel Write at least 150 words.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to share my experience of staying in your hotel
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 week. I recently had a business trip and visited the Alara Hotel in Tbilisi, Georgia. My total impression is fine, but I, as a true dataist, tend to share my experience with others to streamline business processes worldwide. Speaking of pros, you provided me with superb accommodation with great proximity to our company office. Plus, the trip from the airport was not too long. I usually get motion sickness in a taxi, so that point is crucial to me. Unfortunately, my AC did not work, and nobody was able to fix it over all three days I was there.
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, the room was too small even for me alone, and I could not do my typical yoga practice. I would like to offer some suggestions to improve your service if you do not mind.
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, you really need something like a dashboard for your ventilation system to prevent guests from overheating.
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, some sort of 3D models with actual room sizes will come in handy for everyone who wants to book a room in your hotel. Thank you for your time and participation. Yours faithfully, Adam Smith

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Greeting
Start with a short but friendly greeting and express a general opinion about the hotel before giving specific details.
Logical Structure
Organize your ideas into clear paragraphs, with one main idea per paragraph, and use a range of cohesive devices effectively throughout the letter.
Writing Tone
Maintain a suitable level of formality throughout the letter. Avoid overly casual language and colloquial expressions.
Single Idea per Paragraph
Develop your paragraphs more fully by expanding on the points. Include specific examples or experiences to illustrate your points.
Complete Response
Give a clear and complete response to each of the bullet points listed in the task prompt. Ensure all three points are addressed thoroughly.
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