People have little understanding of the importance of the natural world, what are the reasons and how can people learn more about the natural world?

Today, April 4th, I was heading to Massebesic Lake, located in Auburn, New Hampshire. Having arrived there quite early in the morning, I witnessed the natural creatures being still lazy to wake up from a short-night sleep during the spring. I started to settle down on a big rock, facing to the lake,
then
took a sip of hot coffee and observed the surroundings. Well! I believed I found a right place
to begin
citing out loud my favourite poem, “Daffodils” by Wordsworth. The area was empty and seemed I was the only person in the park, but I tried to look for some things moving and there were a few people paddling kayaks. I was less afraid of loneliness. I started reading out loud the poem. As I began with the
first
line “I wandered lonely as a cloud,” a strong sensation of isolation slammed into my mind during
this
rough time period of the pandemic as well as the stay-at-home order. Yet, I was not threatened by that scary thought because I was in the
nature
with my confidence. I kept calm to read the
next
few lines, I was gradually submerging into the
nature
when most of natural creatures,
such
as trees, lake, and waves, were standing around me. The poem inspired my imagination up to a higher level that I could feel the natural creature as friends.
Therefore
, the natural kindness and friendliness diminish my feeling of isolation. “Wait a
second
!” I heard birds humming as they were singing cheerfully to welcome some sunlight, shining through the dark clouds. What I created in my mind now is a vivid picture of hope as if these essential natural elements help me create my own natural world, which assure me to continue enjoying
nature
’s pleasure. The
nature
favoured me both pleasant sound and gorgeous sight as if the
nature
embraced me and relieved my anxiety of loneliness.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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