~2020-01-07: Task 1 You ride a bicycle to work, but there is a problem with the parking. Write a letter to the building manger to provide bicycle parking. In your letter, you should: • why you ride a bicycle to work • what the problem is with the parking • what your suggest are.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

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letter with regard to the unavailability of a parking area for bicycles near the building premises. I am a resident of

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building for the past 9 years, and my apartment number is A-27. Since my work is

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downtown I have to commute through different modes in order to reach my office.

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had become extremely tedious, and

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expensive.

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, I have instigated to travel to my office through cycles as it

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efficient and convenient for me.

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I hardly got time to engross myself in any physical activity.

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activity in my schedule which is beneficial for my physical health as well.

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, it has come to my attention that there is no parking stand for bicycles in the entire building.

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, many owners who have a bicycle, either park it on the footpath or

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any other vehicles.

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, due to lack of

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many complain of theft and damage.

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, the cycles parked

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other automobiles

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tend to damage it from scratches and dents. Overall, I would kindly request you provide a space for parking cycles. If I may, there have a few suggestions,

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, installing a parking stand near our building would be appreciated,

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the space

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the main gate of the building can be utilized for it to be installed. I hope you could understand the situation and take

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favourably. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours truly,

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

268 words

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