Some people think that paying tax is their only duty, while others believe that we have more responsibilities towards our society. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Some would argue that paying
tax
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taxes
to
government
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the government
is their only responsibility, while others would say that there are other duties as well.
Although
paying
tax
enhances
government
to implement more welfare schemes, I believe that people should avoid
crime
from happening. On the one hand, some people think that paying
tax
helps in implementing more welfare plans to the poor.
That is
to say that,
government
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the government
needs money to implement various schemes which can improve the life of its citizen's. The apparent corollary of
this
is a great surge in the nation's GDP.
For instance
, a recent article published in TimesNow newspaper, which is renowned for its accuracy and fairness, stated that the people benefitted from the welfare schemes in India increased by 15% after increasing the
tax
percentage by 5%.
However
, I believe that citizens’ duty is not limited
to
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to, tax
tax
payment but
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payment, but
also
applicable to reporting crimes.
On the other hand
, it is often believed that it is
peoples' duty
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the peoples' duty
a peoples' duty
to avoid
crime
from happening.
In other words
, people should avoid
crime
before it happens or at least they should report it immediately as responsible citizens, which makes a nation better place to live.
For instance
, the
government
of Ireland recently passed an order stating that, it is
peoples' duty
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the peoples' duty
a peoples' duty
to report
crime
immediately to the nearest police station which resulted in a reduction of
crime
by 10%. I believe
this
school of thought is preferable because a nation’s happiness index is dependent on other factors
also
. In conclusion,
although
paying
tax benefits
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the tax benefits government
government
to implement more schemes to poor people, I believe that there are other responsibilities as well
such
as avoiding crimes before they happen.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fiscal responsibilities
  • state's revenues
  • societal structures
  • moral and societal duties
  • community service
  • environmental sustainability
  • democratic processes
  • efficiency
  • utilizing tax revenues
  • social issues
  • redundant
  • active citizenship
  • civic engagement
  • personal and collective efforts
  • societal enhancement
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