Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays, the absence of communication linked to face to face result in the
disappearane
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Disappearance
Disappearane
of some
language
. I strongly disagree it is important to
preseve
keep or maintain in unaltered condition; cause to remain or last
preserve
them
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Them
. It is true that there are some positives to
using
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be used
one
language
, most notably it
would
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Would
be easy to travel, do business in daily life. A
second
remedy might be
organize
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Organize
any treaty without the help of
language
specilist
an expert who is devoted to one occupation or branch of learning
specialists
and reduce national
boundaries
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Boundaries
.
This
canrapidly
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can rapidly
lead to develop our society. In spite of these
argument
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The argument
Argument
, I believe that linguists should try to save a rare
language
.
because
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Because
all
languages
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Languages
more signi*cant role amongst people. The ever-rising use of
singile
badminton played with one person on each side
singles
singular
language
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Language
leads to be
casue
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causing
cause
case
coarse
the gravest problems.
Example
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An example
The example
can be seen in
while
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a while
the
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The
major languages are
encircling
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encircled
within
world
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the world
worlds
, others lose quietly their own
history
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History
and
cutture
a particular society at a particular time and place
culture
. If a
language
disappare we
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disappears, we
disappears we
disappear we
despair we
will lose the rich
cultural
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culture
diversity
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Diversity
. Governments
also
consrve
fruit preserved by cooking with sugar
conserve
traditions, customs and behaviour that are
part
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Part
of a country's history.
Moreover
,
language
also
essential with people's
sense
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Sense
of sameness. Taking everything into consideration while many people will
be
a light strong brittle grey toxic bivalent metallic element
Be
unaffected by the loss of
language
, and
this
my
expresses possibility
may
make
comunicating
the activity of communicating; the activity of conveying information
communicating
easier in
some
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Some
cases. It
would be appear
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would appear
that all languages are signi*cant and should be
preserved
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Preserved
.

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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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