Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Watching television is bad for children. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

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contemporary world, technology is rising at a fast pace. With

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advancement, one of the oldest electronic devices

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television

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set is

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plays an important role in our society. Some people believe that watching

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is harmful for kids.

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, in my opinion,

television

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has some positive impact on

child

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's intellectual development along with some side effects.

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of all,

Television

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helps to explore the knowledge and imagination power of an infant.While watching different programmes on

television

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child

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starts to generate a story or an imaginable picture in his or her mind which in turn wider the perspective of a

child

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to see things from different angles. In evidence of

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, I would like to elaborate my own childhood example, when I was just 9 years old I was quite fancy to watch different art and craft shows that built my interest in drawing classes.

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, In my class I started to present some different art works with the help of my imagination which I created through various

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art series. So, watching

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proved as the best for me as a

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. On the other side, the people who believe that watching

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is not good for children, they think so because most of the children watch

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programmes for long hours, which disturbs their offspring's regularly scheduled activities

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as playing, eating, studying and sleeping.

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habit halts the physical growth of a

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in spite of intellectual growth.

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, when a

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watch screen continuously without getting interrupted, his eye sight might suffer due to the impact of hazardous Ultra Violet rays emerged from

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the TV screen

a TV screen

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child

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children

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may face some health issues like insomnia, sickness, weakness, indigestion

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is the reason, why some people thought that

television

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is bad for children. To conclude,

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sets, play an important role in elaborating the knowledge of a

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child whereas

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child, whereas

, long hour watching

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may put

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into some serious health hazards. But, these physical problems might be eliminated by proper scheduling of daily activities, which is to be done by a

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Mon Apr 06 2020

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Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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