The graph below gives information about annual rainfall in Brazilia between 2001 and 2011

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information about how annual

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fluctuated in

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over a period of 10 years between 2001 and 2011. In the beginning, the figure stood at about over 700mm, before experiencing a decrease of approximately 500mm in 2002.

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grew gradually over the

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to reach about 850mm.

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upward trend

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noticeably. After a slight increase, it dropped again in 2008 to the same level as it was in 2006. In 2010, it reached its peak of about a bit less than 1000mm of

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there was a marked decline back to

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year levels as figures nearly doubled.

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Brazilia

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remained relatively unchanged in the end, despite violent fluctuations throughout the period.

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, it was at its highest in 2010

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the weakest figure could be observed in 2002

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annual rainfall
millimeters
trend
fluctuation
peak
trough
anomaly
climatic event
precipitation
hydrological cycle
evaporation
condensation
meteorological data
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The graph below gives information about annual rainfall in Brazilia between 2001 and 2011

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