The graph below gives information about annual rainfall in Brazilia between 2001 and 2011
The given line graph illustrates
the
information about how annual Correct article usage
apply
rainfall
fluctuated in Brazilia
over a period of 10 years between 2001 and 2011.
In the beginning, the figure stood at about over 700mm, before experiencing a decrease of approximately 500mm in 2002. Correct your spelling
Brazil
Following
this
, annual rainfall
grew gradually over the next
3years
to reach about 850mm. Correct your spelling
3 years
However
, this
upward trend Add a missing verb
has broken
broken
noticeably. After a slight increase, it dropped again in 2008 to the same level as it was in 2006. In 2010, it reached its peak of about a bit less than 1000mm of Wrong verb form
broke
rainfall
. But, at the end
of this
period
there was a marked decline back to Add a comma
,period
2001
year levels as figures nearly doubled.
Change the article
the 2001
To sum up
, annual rainfall
in Brazilia
remained relatively unchanged in the end, despite violent fluctuations throughout the period. Correct your spelling
Brazil
Besides
, it was at its highest in 2010 while
the weakest figure could be observed in 2002Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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