Since traveling abroad became relatively inexpensive, more countries have opened their doors for foreign tourists. Is it a positive or negative trend? Discuss.

In our modern world, the need for overseas

tourism

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has become much more prevalent

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reasonable

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. In response, there is a growing trend of

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opening their

boarders

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borders

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for foreigners.

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trend certainly has its own benefits, I feel that there will be

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more drawbacks, which will be discussed in

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essay. There are various reasons why it might be considered beneficial for authorities to welcome visitors from around the world to their homelands.

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some statistics, the profits coming from

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account for a huge proportion of the local economies. Billions of dollars per

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can be invested in building hospitals, organizing state-funded schools and other social welfare in order to better citizens’ living standards.

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, traveling abroad brings about knowledge and experiences,

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our horizons which creates a more judgment-free and loving world for human beings. At the same time, it

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enhances mutual

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respect between countries and strengthens international relations.

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, I agree with those who argue that there should be limitations on opening doors for foreign tourists. First of all, mass

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can be a serious risk to

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environment and ecology. Without making sustainable

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development

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plans, the hotter a spot is, the greater it will be commercially exploited to the extent that the next generations may never see that attraction in its pristine form.

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, the vacation industry is an effective and strong tool for

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invasion. There is a good chance that the original background of a country might slowly fade as the natives are heavily influenced by other regions’ cultures and sometimes

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their mother tongue

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.

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, when it comes to a place

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supposed to enhance Vietnamese patterns like Hoi An Ancient Town, the number of only-

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zones is nearly equal to traditional places. In conclusion,

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it might seem sensible for

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governments’

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promoting

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overseas

tourism

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, I personally prefer the current system in which our environment and cultures are preserved. It

is highly recommend

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that every legal

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should be taken into consideration in order to balance

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the pros and cons of

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trend.