Some people think that paying tax is their only duty while others believe that we have more responsibilities towards society. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

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People have different approach towards contribution to the society. Some may assume that only

tax

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paying is enough service to the

country

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, some folks think that they should have more responsibility for the

nation

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and society. I will discuss both views to form an opinion. On one hand, some citizens argue that paying a levy is their mere liability towards the

country

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. Taxes help a government to the funding of different services

such

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as, Healthcare, education and a defence mechanism.

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firstly

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, paying a

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brings

new version

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a new version

new versions

of the

country

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towards you, because of your assistance to the

nation

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keep a

country

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stronger than ever before.

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, some of the countries provide free education to children.

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, Canada gives free primary education due to charging extra taxes. Some underdeveloped countries did not charge taxes, because of these citizens do not get essential services. Some individuals do not pay taxes, with their lethargic behaviour

country

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will become underdeveloped. On the other side, Countries spent money from taxes on buildings, hospitals and on other inevitable resources.

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importance

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the importance

of paying

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is necessary.

On the other hand

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, paying

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its not our only undertaking. To create a peaceful and convenient region, citizens should aid to the community. If citizens were selfish and self-obsessed, there would be no chance of recuperating a co-

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operative

operation

operator

and harmonious situation.

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, if people feel responsible for

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nation

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the nation

a nation

they should do their bit through many ways like

Accept space

environment,

healthcare

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health care

. They should encourage people through climate awareness programs. These

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are

the every

individuals

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individual

individual's

individuals'

liability for the

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, if we help a bit, a

country

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provides you a lot more. In

conclusion, despite of

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conclusion, despite

people having different opinions, but in my perspective, not only paying a

tax

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is our duty. To do a little bit extra creates a prosperous life and brings happiness towards us.

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Topic Vocabulary:

fiscal responsibilities
state's revenues
societal structures
moral and societal duties
community service
environmental sustainability
democratic processes
efficiency
utilizing tax revenues
social issues
redundant
active citizenship
civic engagement
personal and collective efforts
societal enhancement

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