Scientific research should be funded by governments rather than commercial organisations. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a belief that the authorized unit should be responsible for the investment behind the scientific
research
and not the private organization. I completely agree with
this
view point
a mental position from which things are viewed
viewpoint
.
To begin
with, the issues that can be created if the
research
has been funded by the commercial unit. One of them is limited availability of
result
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the result
for
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of
the public use.
In other words
,
such
companies, who is heavily invested money and time for the
research
,
is
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are
more likely to focus on the earning
instead
of aiming the humanity. The result of
this
, the solution
is only be
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is only being
has only been
is only to be
available to the people who can effort it at the high price.
For example
, the medicine for
coronavirus
will be so much costly if it has been produced by the private sector and will not available to
the poorer
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the poor
people. Another one is the limited access to the fund to invest in the
research
. To clarify
this
,
athough
even though, in spite of the fact that
although
though
the commercial organisation can spend good money on the scientific
research
, they could not allocate as much as money that the government can.
Hence
, they could not hire highly skilled person or purchase costly equipment which is
require
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required
to test the quality of the product. On the other side, there are several benefits if the invention’s cost has been bared by the ministry.
Firstly
, the blue print of the invention will be kept secured at high level and the cloning will be controlled. To simplify
this
, as the patent of creation will be held by the authority, there will be less chance of duplication in the local.
For instance
, automatic weapon.
Secondly
, the quality of
product
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the product
will not
compromised
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compromise
. Because of the several strict rules and regulations by the government for their own
research
, the reliability of
such
source
will be high compare
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will high be compared
will be high compare
to the production of the private company. In conclusion, not only there are several negative sides of investment in science investigation by the company,
such
as lack of final output
availbility
the quality of being at hand when needed
availability
to the public and the low investment capacity, but there are
also
several positive aspects,
such
as highly secured idea and the quality, if the
research
has been funded by the authority.
Therefore
, it
can not be deny
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can not be denied
that the council should stand for the charges if the invention is so much important to the public.
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