You have recently started attending hobby classes in your city. Your mother in your hometown wants to know about it. Write a letter to your mother. In the letter, mention: • What class are you taking? • How do you like it? • How long will you take the classes?

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Dear mama, Hope you are doing great. I wish

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I could see you healthy forever. I couldn’t talk to you much on the phone, due to the time difference between our places. As you know, I have started attending a

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to my career. I would like to shift to Canada for which, I have to pass

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course. I find the outcome very interesting, but at the same time, I’m

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nervous. Ms Sraddha is a wonderful mentor, who stands with me to improve my grammar issue.

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of four exam sections in which I find some difficulty in writing. Hope that I will overcome my fear of failing with the power of reading.

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class. I have completed around 31. So a few more classes are there, which I will complete soon.

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I will face the exam with confidence. Pray for me, your prayers are my strength. I will always remember your words- “ education is our passport to the future, for tomorrow belongs to the people who prepare for it today”. Hope to see you soon. Miss you, love you Mom Yours lovingly, Silpa Sujith

Thu Apr 09 2020

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

196 words

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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

being slim is associated with fashion. do you think it is a positive or negative trend?

In some places old age is valued, while in ohter cultures yoouth is considered more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

You have a complaint about the hotel you stayed at while attending a meeting that was booked by the organiser of a company meeting. Write a letter to the organiser of the meeting and include Details about the meeting The problem you face What should be done

It is sometimes said that countries should produce all the food for their populations to eat and import as little as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.