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Band 8.5

A colleague gave you a book which you used for your presentation. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter, you should say: •What the presentation was about, •Why the presentation was important, •How did the book help you? You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear …………….. , You get 20 minutes to complete this task.

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Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing to express my sincere gratitude for lending me your book over the past two weeks. In fact, your kindness played a crucial role in helping me deliver a successful and professional presentation. As you may know, my speech had been focused on project management constraints.
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, it was particularly significant as it directly influenced my recent promotion within our department. Owing to the data from the book, the presentation was well-received, and resultantly, I have since been assigned by headquarters to manage our ongoing revamp project—a clear indication of its positive impact.
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, your book was incredibly helpful in preparing for
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 presentation.
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, the three detailed chapters on time, cost, and risk management provided me with the requisite guidance and data to structure the content effectively. Once again, thank you for your generosity and support. I truly appreciate it and look forward to discussing
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 with you soon. Yours sincerely, Abraham Streeter

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Task Achievement
Consider providing a more detailed explanation of why the presentation was important to enhance your task response.
Coherence and Cohesion
You could improve the flow of ideas by adding transitions between points.
Coherence and Cohesion
The letter is well-structured with a clear greeting and closing, creating a polished and professional tone.
Task Achievement
You successfully addressed all parts of the task, demonstrating strong task achievement.
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