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You have had a problem with your next-door neighbour. You have not been able to speak to your neighbour about this. Write a letter to this neighbour. In your letter *Explain the problem *Suggest a solution *Say what action you will take if the situation does not improve

#neighbour #*explain #*suggest #*say #action #situation
Dear Mr. Joey, I am writing
this
 letter to express my annoyance
due to
 the continuous noise made by your new pet dog. I wanted to elucidate it to you earlier but I was much occupied with my office work. At the onset, the main problem for me is the untimely barks of your dog in the night that interrupts my sleep and I feel so restless every next morning. I think the wall of the room where your dog stays is adjacent to my bedroom’s wall, which increases the frequency of the noise.
Therefore
, It is my suggestion to you that it could be a relief for me if you change the place of the pet house to another place.
Moreover
, because small pets sometimes require attention and food at night, checking his feed box twice could be appropriate.
Lastly
, I hope you will work on
this
 problem attentively lest it should lead me to initiate a legal discourse against you. The quickest action will be anticipated and appreciated. Best regards, John Mathew
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task achievement
Consider elaborating slightly more on the problem and how it affects you for a more comprehensive response.
coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph contains a single, clear idea to improve coherence. For instance, separating the solution suggestion from the proposed actions to take if the situation does not improve.
task achievement
You have clearly addressed the task requirements by explaining the problem, suggesting a solution, and stating the consequences if the situation does not improve.
task achievement
The tone of the letter is polite and appropriate for addressing a neighbor about a sensitive issue.
coherence cohesion
The letter follows a logical structure and flows well from one point to the next.
coherence cohesion
You have effectively organized the content into paragraphs with a greeting, body, and closing.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • disturbance
  • inconvenience
  • excessive
  • disruption
  • mutual respect
  • courtesy
  • noise levels
  • reasonable hours
  • compromise
  • resolve
  • amicably
  • escalate
  • property management
  • authorities
  • immediate attention
  • remedy
  • considerate
  • persistent issue
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