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The chart shows sales of million bottles of milk and honey in Uzbekistan in 2005

The chart shows sales of million bottles of milk and honey in Uzbekistan in 2005
A glance at the bar chart provided reveals data for how many bottles of milk and honey were purchased by the residents of Uzbekistan over the decade. One particularly interesting fact highlighted by the figure is that the sale of milk gradually increased and remained steady for the
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 two years.
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 is the fact that the interest of Uzbek people towards honey was smaller than milk except
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 1998.

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