The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000.
The bar chart shows
passengers
Correct article usage
the passengers
number
who used three airports( JohnF. Kennedy
, LaGuardia, and Newark) of
New York City in the period of 5 Change preposition
in
years
from 1995 to 2000.
In general, there was a fluctuant trend in the number
of passengers
who travelled via John F. Kennedy
airport, while
the other two airports saw an upward trend.
In 1995, the number
of travelers
at Newark was 15 Change the spelling
travellers
million
, which was 20 million
lower than that of passengers
used
LaGuardia. Both figures continue to increase gradually, but in 1998 Correct pronoun usage
who used
passengers
at Newark remained stable for the last
three years
, with 41 million
. As can be seen from the chart, more passengers
used LaGuardia airport in the year 2000 compared with other airports. It held the first rank in 2000, well under 70 million
.
By 1995, the amounts of travellers Correct pronoun usage
who used
used
John F. Wrong verb form
using
Kennedy
airport received 27 million
. During the next
2 years
, passengers
at John F. Kennedy
are by far highest
Add an article
the highest
number
of all years
, it took a lead with 48 million
travelers
. Change the spelling
travellers
Then
, the number
of passengers
experienced a considerable drop, until 2000, it regained pace and increased, at
42 Change preposition
to
million
travelers
.Change the spelling
travellers
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