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The internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are. On the other hand, it also isolates us and encourages people not to socialise.' To what extent do you agree or disagree with these statements? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, we usually hear a phrase that "
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 makes whoever is far away seems near, and whoever is near feels so far". By
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the internet
 could actually give us barrier to socialise in the real world, even though
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 plays an important role in human everyday life. It is because the impact of the social media that makes us be able to reach anyone, wherever they are, but sometimes we tend to forget the person
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 standing in front of us caused by our over-attention to our phones.  In fact, there are several cases that people usually being too excited on their phone and makes them forget about their real world.
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, from my experiences, when it comes to a family gathering, I can see many family members opened their phone in a long time, ignored others, and got lack of focus in one moment.
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 as isolation, not being respected, and can bring tension from one person to another.
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, we can't argue to ban
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 because it is really important for people to do several beneficial behaviour,
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 like doing business, studying, and many more. We can
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 easily chatting with friends inside and outside our country, connected with the news of the world, and gathered information.  The conclusion is, we have to use
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 wisely. By managing time in online platform, not playing phone when in front of others, and avoiding misleading information, these behaviours could lead an effective and a wise way to use
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