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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#future #nobody #newspapers #books
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These days,
people
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 increasingly like reading
books
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 on the website. Some
people
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 hold the view that there is nobody will buy paper newspapers,
books
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, maps and so on. In my opinion, I support
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 view, it is because reading all kinds of articles or novels is so convenient and cheap even increases personal wealth in daily life. On the one hand, reading
books
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 online is a good way to improve reading convenience. Nowadays, the Internet, TikTok, BiliBili.com and so on are the main places to get information news, and knowledge.
People
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 can find the information the first time and it does not cost too much money, meanwhile finding information online can improve work and study efficiency.
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, reading
books
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 on the website is a good action to improve the technology. As the need for the Internet is growing, there are more and more problems to solve. Meanwhile , it is
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 can promote the development of smartphones, iPads, laptops and so on.And electronic products will become more and more satisfying to everyone's needs.
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 is a great form to develop economic growth.
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,
people
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 are keen on reading the printed newspapers. they want to buy some
books
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 as the collection.
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, As far as we all know, paper become more and more expensive, and the price of
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 is
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 growing. The collection of
books
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 is a small percentage nowadays, even fewer
people
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 are into reading to the book store or library in their spare time. In conclusion,
people
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 should adjust the trend of reading
books
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 online, It is a good way to get
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 without paying, and even
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 the development of the sharing economy.
People
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 should support the development of
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 trend.
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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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